Rameau’s Review Archive: Galley Proof by Eric Arvin

Rameau’s ramblings: Originally posted on Goodreads on March 21st 2012. 

Fiction writer Logan Brandish is perfectly happy in his peaceful small-town routine with his best friend, his cat, and his boyfriend—until he meets the editor of his next book, the handsome Brock Kimble, and the lazy quiet of everyday living goes flying out the window. Faced with real passion for the first time, Logan becomes restless and agitated, and soon his life and his new manuscript—a work in progress he’d always thought would be completed—are in a shambles.

But as Logan is learning, you can’t always get what you want… at least not right away. To take his mind off the mess, he takes a trip, but even the beautiful Italian, um, scenery can’t keep his thoughts from his erstwhile editor for long. Logan just might have to admit there are some things you can’t run from.

Galley ProofGalley Proof by Eric Arvin

Everybody has read those books–usually they come with horrendous cover art–that start with an apparent self-ironic scene that tries to justify using a cliché. It’s some trope that has been beaten, hit, struck, battered, hammered, trashed, pummelled, and flattened to the ground ages ago. And for a while it works.

The author works his ass off and makes the first person past tense voice of his character sound like something hilarious, something new, refreshing, and witty. Then he crosses the line from a fine comedy to unadulterated spoof and ruins the effect. If you, the reader, are very lucky the narrative still sounds entertaining enough to carry through to the end and lets you finish a book instead of feeding your DNF pile.

If you’re very, extremely, exceptionally, not-that-uncommonly-at-all unfortunate, you’ll end up with a WTF face and whole lot of wasted hours. Hours of your life that you’ll never be able to reclaim. At which point you either decide to move on and give this author a wide berth in the future, or you decide to give something back to the reading community and write a longwinded review that starts with a handful of meta-paragraphs sure to annoy innocent review readers.


Welcome to my life.

This book reads like an autobiography trying to be self-ironic and falling short by miles. It’s like the author decided to skip coming up with anything original or fictional and instead document his day-to-day life in the publishing world. Maybe his editor told him to throw in a few outrageous characters and give them the kind of urban legend lives you only hear around the water cooler or wherever the workers go to smoke illicitly. Maybe the author was bored and decided to imitate a handful of his idols–in one book.

Whatever led to the creation and publication of this book, is everything that’s wrong with the publishing industry today. This book is unbalanced, tactless, and inane. If it had to be published, why couldn’t it be an in-house newsletter to amuse the people who are able to recognise and appreciate the publishing jokes. If it had to be published as a gay romance novel or erotica wannabe, why not write one. If this had to be published at all, why not just do it and NOT market it as something it’s not.

This book is mislabelled as a gay romance. It’s mislabelled as a romance. There’s no romance here. There is simply a string of sex scenes and fuckbuddies without anything resembling a plot.

Also, Arvin went there. He had the ex-editor-fuckbuddy-friend attack-comment on a one star rating-review. How is this any better than the author–still talking about the book characters, just want to make it clear for Goodreads staff–himself commenting on a negative review? Just having it in the book is like condoning bad behaviour and I’ve had my limit. I would have given this book one star regardless, this just removed any guilt I might have felt.

Had Galley Proof been shelved under general fiction I might be more forgiving to the abrupt style changes and the utter lack of the thin red line that connects it all, but it wasn’t and I’m not. If only Arvin had said what he made his character say:

“I have decided it’s not worth my time to write nor is it worth her time to read.”

I received a copy of this book from the publisher via NetGalley.

You can also read this review on Sandra’s My Fiction Nook-blog.

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9 Responses to Rameau’s Review Archive: Galley Proof by Eric Arvin

  1. This book is mislabelled as a gay romance. It's mislabelled as a romance. There's no romance here. There is simply a string of sex scenes and fuckbuddies without anything resembling a plot. I think we should compose a list of books which might damage your brain. I suppose this one would qualify. Small wonder, taking into account the fact that the author behaved as he behaved.

  2. Blodeuedd says:

    Lots of fails here lately.Oh and I will move, yup, so what about you Ana?

  3. I will follow of course. 🙂

  4. What-a-what? This book sounds like such a train wreck I'm kinda tempted to read it.

  5. The world definitely needs this list.

  6. Welcome to the club of insane masochists ;p

  7. rameau says:

    The only problem with that list is that the act of compiling it is enough to damage our brains.

  8. rameau says:

    Yes. Exactly.

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